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by Anne Elder
Fri Sep 01, 2017 6:39 pm
Forum: Rooms August 2017
Topic: Rooms Challenge " Locked in a Cellar" Tom
Replies: 4
Views: 187

Re: Rooms Challenge " Locked in a Cellar" Tom

No Tom, I actually like the last verse, just not the third line of it ;) The problem I have is that once I have a tune in my head for a particular song I find it almost impossible to change it. Yes same here. I noticed though that when I'm working longer on a song that I can change some bits at leas...
by Anne Elder
Fri Sep 01, 2017 7:14 am
Forum: Rooms August 2017
Topic: Rooms Challenge " Locked in a Cellar" Tom
Replies: 4
Views: 187

Re: Rooms Challenge " Locked in a Cellar" Tom

Lovely song and great story, Tom! I can so well imagine you singing that in a pub, your audience will love it ;) (OOK, maybe not the barkeeper ...) Some nitpicking: The chorus could have a bit more glamour, maybe try one or two different chords there. And in the last verse, the last line falls a bit...
by Anne Elder
Thu Aug 31, 2017 8:26 pm
Forum: Rooms August 2017
Topic: Rooms Challenge " Locked in a Cellar" Tom
Replies: 4
Views: 187

Re: Rooms Challenge " Locked in a Cellar" Tom

Congratulations, Tom!! You made it in time ... (I didn't) :( I'll have a listen to your song tomorrow
by Anne Elder
Tue Aug 29, 2017 6:21 pm
Forum: Rooms August 2017
Topic: Rooms Brainstorming and Progress
Replies: 4
Views: 133

Re: Rooms Brainstorming and Progress

Hi Tom,
was too busy to go on after my first session on this. And today I'm not in the mood to move on :|

Anne
by Anne Elder
Tue Aug 15, 2017 6:20 pm
Forum: Work in Progress Songs
Topic: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)
Replies: 14
Views: 558

Re: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)

OK slightly amended lyrics, I'll have to leave it for now (compromising) or I won't get further with my performing plans :roll: Oh Why - did I go to that party at all? Wasn’t a friend of mine and I was tired as hell Oh Why - didn’t I leave right away? Those boring folks wasting time were so hard to ...
by Anne Elder
Tue Aug 15, 2017 4:47 pm
Forum: Work in Progress Songs
Topic: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)
Replies: 14
Views: 558

Re: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)

Hi Nita, thank you so for your comments!! I might not find a solution to all of them in the near future (see below) but I'll keep your points in mind. I also choose or reject words because of their sound, so it's often difficult to just change one word by a synonym and more changes are needed. Think...
by Anne Elder
Mon Aug 14, 2017 9:55 pm
Forum: Work in Progress Songs
Topic: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)
Replies: 14
Views: 558

Re: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)

...the quarrels just died the "simply non-singable" death ...

Oh why - did fighting replace our kiss’s?
Arguing about petty/only trifles and shit


"Petty" is an endangered species as well ... :evil:

PS: I'm determined to get this one posted by next weekend :evil:
by Anne Elder
Sat Aug 12, 2017 8:18 am
Forum: Music Technology
Topic: Online Jamming
Replies: 1
Views: 178

Online Jamming

Dear all, anyone ready to jam? Just registered at - http://jammr.net - http://www.sofasession.com - http://www.jamkazam.com registration all free, I'd like to try out jamming :) Registered as "tootoobee" again but also put Anne Elder in my profile. Sofasession is the only one you don't nee...
by Anne Elder
Fri Aug 11, 2017 10:55 pm
Forum: Work in Progress Songs
Topic: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)
Replies: 14
Views: 558

Re: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)

Romance ... feels a bit too cheesy at the moment, but I keep it in mind. Thanks a lot Tom!

OK now I need to get back to practicing ;)
by Anne Elder
Fri Aug 11, 2017 2:17 pm
Forum: Work in Progress Songs
Topic: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)
Replies: 14
Views: 558

Re: Oh Why (FAWM 2016)

OK, probably go for something like this, "quarrel" is horrible to sing though and - I somehow agree to you - the sh*t rhyme stands out from the rest of the song a bit. But after all I could change or improve it anytime I feel like it (or get a better idea). How about the "let our love...

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